Sunday, 29 May 2016

My short story

The wind blow past Bart simpson flow. Bart was walking to school. When he got there Milhouse was there. They were strolling to class then Nason stood in front of the them. He yelled give me your lunch money. Milhouse gave it to him but Bart didn't for some reason. Bart said no i will not give you my money. So Nelson started punching Bart and kicking him until till he stop and left.

It was Bart's First class which was woodwork he is building a clock and he turned up and the teacher announced what happened Bart. Bart said nothing is just fell over it was the end of woodwork and the next thing for Bart is science he had to make a bomb. It was lunch art had apple and a bar he started eating for 15min then went outside and played with Milhouse for 20mins

Rig rig the bell to go make in went so now it was Jim he had to climb a rope that was 5 metres tall. It was hard the first time but the second time he got there. Rig rig the bell went to go home so bart got on the bus and headed home. Bart got home and said hi to mum and dad while looking sad Homer the dad went up to Bart's room and said
“what is the matter boy”
Bart said” I got bullied to day by Nelson”.
So Homer said
“ok boy I will go talk to Nelson's mum tomorrow”

The next day Bart got up and had breakfast Homer said to Bart,
“I am going to go talk to Nelson mum today. Do you want to come?”
Bart said “Yea.”
They got in the car and headed to Nelson house so they got to Nelson house and knock on the door and said “anyone home?”
“ No go a way”
“ we need to talk.”said Homer “ Nelson your boy attacked my boy so we need to have a conversation”
so they let Homer and bart in but Nelson and bart have to stay outside. 15min later they came out and said “Nelson apologize for being mean to bart sorry Bart”
Nelson said”
and now you to have to be friends

Sunday, 1 May 2016


see the chances of something happening

Short story

Blog post title: I can describe the structure of a Short Story

Something I have learned about the structure of short stories is they are short strong and punchy

After reading some short stories two things I will remember when I write my own short story are and that they need to be strong and punchy so that the reader will be interested